June 3, 2011

Use conjunctions in IELTS writing (Cohesion, Part 2 of 4)

In the IELTS writing test, a candidate should be able to use a variety of cohesive devices. The other day, we talked about using reference words. Today, you'll be able to add another tool to improve your writing skill. This involves the use of certain linking words which are known as conjunctions. Some examples of conjunctions that you could use are "and," "or," and "but," among others.

To see them in action, we'd like to invite you to read excerpts of Christine Sheehy's article at the NZ Herald entitled "Introducing 'The Beauty of Humanity Movement'".

Re: "and"


Use "and" to connect clauses that have equal ideas.
Example:

I read the first half of two promising books, before tossing them aside. They were decent enough and if I was reading for pleasure alone I would have continued.

Re: "or"


Use "or" to connect clauses that state alternative ideas.
Example:

I'm not expecting a masterpiece every time, but there has to be something challenging about it. Something that engages our emotions, takes us to a new place or encourages us to think about things in a different way. In other words, we need something to discuss.

Re: "but"


Use "but" to show contrast.
Example:

I'm not expecting a masterpiece every time, but there has to be something challenging about it. Something that engages our emotions, takes us to a new place or encourages us to think about things in a different way. In other words, we need something to discuss.

You could use other conjunctions, of course. We encourage you to research for them. With conjunctions, you'd notice that you'll be able to easily connect clauses, which, in turn, would result to a smooth flow of ideas. Therefore, use them to your advantage.

Next, we will be sharing our tips with regard to cohesion through synonyms. Cheers!


Attribution to Christine Sheehy and her article at the NZ Herald entitled "Introducing 'The Beauty of Humanity Movement'."


Read the related tips: